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Monday, June 15, 2020
When Matariki Comes Free Verse Poem
Last week in writing we wrote a free verse poem about Matariki. We had to write it out on a goggle docs. Today we had it on the goggle slide and fix it and stuff like the font. It is really fun. Miss McLeod (our teacher) is going to print them out and we are going to decorate it like drawing stuff that are related to Matariki. I enjoyed everything, nothing was really challenging.
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Hi arwen i like the words you used in that poem maybe next time you could use the same font its kind of confusing
ReplyDeleteHi Maddie its Arwen, I don´t really get how it is confusing but I will acknowledge your thoughts. Thank you!
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