I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Would you rather...
For writing my literacy class we had to write would you rather. It was so fun I found it easy to do everything I didn't find anything challenging. Here is my would you rather.
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I like how you have set up your writing on a piece of paper. I think next time you could maybe make your righting a bit more darker so I can see it but I like your reasons why.
ReplyDeleteI would rather have no sweets to and have my computer instead specially cause i try to get fit why did you do it on paper to?
ReplyDeleteI did it on paper because I dont usually do things on paper. so did you do it on paper?
DeleteNo i did mine on Chromebook because its easier and you can put it on blogs easy
DeleteThats far enough and true. Did you put your would you rather on a slide?
DeleteI like how you have good reasons I really like it.But you can make the words a little bigger.You can zoom it out a little more.But the rest is awesome keep it up.
ReplyDeletethank you Kristian for the feedback do you think it is fantastic?
DeleteHey Arwen Awesome Work . Keep That Good choices of would you rather questions . But Maybe Next Time Like Kristian , Cameron and Ayla Said Maybe Make The Righting A bit Bigger/ easer To Read . but anyway keep up the good work Arwen . Bye
ReplyDeleteOk Harmony I will. but do you have any other feedback?
DeleteI do have some more feedback for you. I like How You Used Paper Because You Have Not been using Paper to work with .
DeleteTrue and I do like working on paper to. So no more feedback?
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